Argumentative essay

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 In Seoul, corporal punishment is banned because of student rights. This is causing some problems because Korea don't have another tool to teach bad students. To illustrate, some bad students ignore teachers' words saying "I won't follow your words! you can't hit me!"
 However, did corporal punishments really working correctly out Seoul? There are many incidents that teachers hit students so hard, officially and secretly. Sometimes teachers hit students not really on purpose to teach, but because the teacher is angry or some others, and it is causing harms to the society. Problems are created because of corporal punishment prohibition but it is only a problem in the short term and it has to be solved without any forces. As a result, we should ban corporal punishment from schools in the whole country in The Republic of Korea.

  For the First reason, students have rights to be protected. No one can harm someone else without necessity to protect themselves. Did only Seoul students have their rights?  Did teachers have necessity to beat students? Students don't try to kill their teachers that teachers have to fight back. Also they is students' right to learn, but there is no such right as 'right to teach'. Students should have their rights to make sure they can take their rights, practicing from now. Teens have to be able to shout out for their rights. Students rights.

  For the second reason, corporal punishment does not really work for teaching but it harms education. Students are not animals. They can understand teachers worlds without any threats. Because of just demanding and punishing without explains, students lost leading attitude, originality and self confidence. Corporal punishment make students study with fear not with pleasure. From the study from IEA's TMISS, Korean average math and science capability is the highest but interest is almost the lowest. And many other countries who have high interests don't use corporal punishments to teach students. Corporal punishment is also bad for health. There were a study of behavior medical science journal that tells if you are punished physically in your childhood, you have 60~80% more higher percent to have cancer.

  On the other hand ,Some people think corporal punishment is very helpful preventing giving up teaching. They  say bad students will be out of control if corporal punishment is banned. However, Did Seoul made good job controlling troublemakers in school? These students thinks that they can just ignore the words from teachers by getting hit once. So there are no differences from before between today. The important thing is that those students become worse having bad feelings of society when they be hit. Many criminals said they were hit while growing. Hit students became timid people.
  Some other people thinks corporal punishment regulates students to protect other students' right to study. There are numerous alternative methods to regulate like changing bad students' school, persuading and giving other punishments with explain.

 In conclusion corporal punishment harms rights of the students and it is bad for education. Also corporal punishment is not really helpful for preventing giving up teaching nor regulating students. Korean government have to ban corporal punishment for whole country right now.